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Kate's avatar

This is beautiful Casey. I had a moment of panic somewhere around halfway through, because it suddenly occurred to me that this was only an excerpt, and so it’d probably be short. And I knew I’d want to keep reading. And I do. More, please!

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Steve Stromquist's avatar

Why the hot dog description of putting folded paper into your bag? Just doesn't seem to fit the narrative. Why Hot Dog, not Taco or just folded note paper? But not to be too critical, I was drawn in to your narrative. I wonder what Miles will be really like. Will you be "into" him and will he be "into" you as well?

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